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the unclear idea

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Helping you
make your point

for such is not clear
no not at all

no sense of flow
in that wording of yours

nothing written correctly
no not at all

but so I find
in ideas lost in unclear words

and giving the time
to figure out

the scrambled thought
that not many understand

your ideas speak
of such wonderful things

this needs more work
then the world can know for sure

we simply need
some time

to sit down
and discuss

then after all this
discussion

and time spent deciphering
your thoughts

eventually the piece
will go where you want

and finally the world
will understand your thought

the thought that created
such a beautiful idea
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